I read his essay out loud the way it appeared on the page. In about five hundred words the student used two paragraphs, and, beyond a single period at the end of the first paragraph, used no commas, no semi-colons or colons, no dashes, no quotation marks, and no more periods, not even at theContinue reading “#310: An Elegy for the Essay in English”
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#309: My Morrissey is Getting Better
All day I had Morrissey’s voice in my head after 5 albums worth of The Queen is Dead, the original album and eight sides of bonus and the lyrics to the song “I Know It’s Over” percolating and reverberating everywhere and again; it was almost too much to bear. I walked up and down hallwaysContinue reading “#309: My Morrissey is Getting Better”
#308: An Attempted Explanation
As soon as I decided not to go shopping for music the second day in a row, my car horn alarm went off and I couldn’t get it to stop. I sat there in the car, parked, engine running, horn blasting, poking and pushing every conceivable control surface, even the ones I knew wouldn’t work,Continue reading “#308: An Attempted Explanation”
#307: Priorities
(a casual facebook post this morning turned into a bonus poem for day 21 of Napowrimo) Morning: There’s a lawn to mow, some errands to run, and it’s record store day. But first, I must write a poem. Evening: I wrote the poem. With a rebel yell, I cried mow, mow, mowed, ran those errands,Continue reading “#307: Priorities”
#306: Letters to His Sister (Point of View Cluster in Frankenstein)
Q: Hey kids, what’s the point of view in this here novel? You know, who speaks and to whom are they speaking? A: Well, Walton, he’s the speaker, and he’s writing letters to his sister. But at some point, Victor is speaking to Walton who is writing letters to his sister, but then, Elizabeth isContinue reading “#306: Letters to His Sister (Point of View Cluster in Frankenstein)”
#305: The Offending Journal
I’ve seen students copy all kinds of stuff from one another, sometimes going as far as copying down word for word pages upon pages of a buddy’s journal responses, the act of copying all that text more work than actually doing the work, only with the added “benefit” of not learning anything. But I’ve never seenContinue reading “#305: The Offending Journal”
#304: Willy and Biff Loman Cross Paths with Talking Heads
(with gratitude to David Byrne and Arthur Miller) What have they asked of themselves? The tiniest slice of the pie belongs to that beautiful house, which mostly, they recognize because it’s a thing they can see and a 25 year mortgage they can feel, every month for 25 years. Am I wrong? They have difficulty with this–Continue reading “#304: Willy and Biff Loman Cross Paths with Talking Heads”
#303: The American English Teacher Strategizes for Kids Who Don’t Read
He assigns the pages and when class convenes he understands in short order that only a few kids have bothered to do the reading. The age old dilemma of the high school English teacher: what can be done if kids won’t read, not can’t, but won’t or don’t? Reading everything in class, either out loud or in silence willContinue reading “#303: The American English Teacher Strategizes for Kids Who Don’t Read”
#302: Uncle Meaney
My Uncle Meaney had a long white scar over his midsection, and when he was out boating on family vacations, crabbing, oystering, deep sea fishing, he’d go shirtless, and there was that scar as clear as the writing in the sky. I must have asked him, how’d you get the scar? I was attacked byContinue reading “#302: Uncle Meaney”
#301: In Desperation, the Poet Turns to Facebook Friends for Suggestions
Note: the topic suggestions for the poem appear in boldface. Suppose he is fresh out of ideas, so he turns to facebook for suggestions from friends, near and far, high and low. He waits. It’s like fishing. He waits for a little while. Finally, he gets a bite: the weather. The poet writes: It’s beenContinue reading “#301: In Desperation, the Poet Turns to Facebook Friends for Suggestions”